I like it. “Healer” jumped out to me (around line 10).
After looking at it for a few seconds, you see strings forming. “Sheep.. Like..Took and People” appears toward the bottom. You could rearrange that to: “He took people like sheep”. Exactly how He leads the flock.
August 5th, 2008 at 10:37 pm
I like it. “Healer” jumped out to me (around line 10).
After looking at it for a few seconds, you see strings forming. “Sheep.. Like..Took and People” appears toward the bottom. You could rearrange that to: “He took people like sheep”. Exactly how He leads the flock.